Task 12- Music video first draft feedback and questionnaire

• We need to re film and edit three more shots: Faye and Mark sitting on the bench, Mark running and Faye singing. 
• Edit some of the shots in terms of brightness and lighting. Also add transitions into a few of the main shots. 
• Ensure that all the singing shots are in sync with the music. 
 

• Most of the shots are edited so that Faye's lip syncing fits with the music. 
• We have also incorporated a wide range of camera shots and angles.
• Our shots don't break the 180 degree rule and the editing ensures continuity throughout the whole project.  

1. Is our narrative clear? If so does it fit the video?
2. Which camera shots are the best that we have used? Which are the worst?
3. Have we made good use of the facilities on premier pro?
4. Do you think our music video suits our target audience? If yes, how?
5. Is the lip syncing in time with the artist?
6. What is your favorite scene in the video?
7. Is there any way in which we could improve the video? What could be do? 

I have received verbal feedback from my peers on all of the above questions. The summary of the answers are: 

1. My narrative is clear. 
2. I used a range of shots but some of them did not fit the narrative (the bench scene in particular). 
3. I used a Premier Pro well but I could go more in depth with my editing- for example more transitions and better use of sharpness and highlighting etc.
4.  It does suit the target audience based on the actors, narrative and music genre.
5.  In the most part the lip syncing is good, there are however a couple of shots that could be looked at more closely (mainly in the studio shots). 
6. Mainly the tracking shot at the beginning and the bridge shot towards the end were the most liked shots.   
7. To make it better I need to refilm a few shots to make the narrative more clear and maybe add a title at the start.