Credits and striking opening closes up. A performance links
the artist in separate locations lip synching as she walk and cross cutting
this with a performance in a recording studio.
Lip synching is achieved with careful editing in a range of locations.
Some lighting issues could be resolved with thought given to
a light source or the time of day. This
leads to a lack of clarity in some of the shots.
Shots of the couple are edited together to show a narrative
indicating a relationship.
The motif of the necklace is indicated in close up. There
are some well composed shots particularly in close up which show an awareness
of framing and a range of controlled types of shot are employed using a tripod
to keep shots steady.
Effective transitions are placed between shots responding to
feedback to improve the edit
More ambition with the narrative would allow improvement. 26/40
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