Friday, 20 November 2015

November feedback

You have explained the development of ideas and mind mapped original ideas.

Some basic storyboards are published which provide an outline of the narrative.

Location recce photographs are published and a basic risk assessment is provided although these can be reflected upon.

You have made some attempt to identify a target audience using the work covered in class.  Again you could develop this exploration.

I am hoping that you can go beyond the generic and show creativity and flair

There is some limited analysis of print artefacts.

Your posts show that you know what you need to cover but this has not happened yet. there is a lack of progress so I hope that your project gains some momentum from here on.

The deadline is Christmas so move up a gear to ensure that you achieve your potential.  At present the web-log does not reflect your potential and needs addressing.

Your edit needs to be completed at least to a first cut which we can provide feedback about.


Targets

  • Move the blog from level 2 (basic) to level 3 (proficient) by adding detail and provindg thorough reflection.

  • Document your creative journey

  • Complete a first cut

1 comment:

  1. I will have completed my first cut by October 30th.
    I will begin to document my creative journey now.
    Check through the blog for accuracy- looking at spelling, punctuation and grammar.

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