Preparation needs to be more thorough.
Three cells in a storyboard leaves you looking poorly prepared for a pitch to
an audience.
You showed the music video and clearly
explained your choice of artist due to her being unknown and covering well
known artists. I like this idea as it gives you a blank slate to brand the
artist.
The lyrics provide you with ideas and I
need to see them annotated evidencing development of ideas.
Schedule effectively so that you gain
momentum at this point. October
half-term is late to start filming, begin now.
Publish storyboards on the blog
How ill you brand the artist, come up with
some mood boards and descriptions of style, costume, hair.
Prepare for a photo shoot with your artist.
Could we record the artist here if she is a
friend. Use the recording studio and make your own cover of the song. This will improve your grade and allow a performance
element to be filmed.
I have now added a picture of the annotated lyrics, the production schedule and we are to begin filming before half-term, this includes filming in the recording studio.
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